Tuesday, 12 November 2013

SHORT STORY

3 boys, Leo, Tom and Lee. They are not part of the same friendship group but one day they are on a school trip and are put in the same group. They get lost on this school and end up in a forest and they find a barbeque with some food cooking on it. They are hungry so decide to eat some. at first they just feel the same as they did before.
They sit down in the forest and Tom says 'i wish i could go back to school now' And they are transported back to school. Tom has gained a power that makes him be able to wish anything and it will come true but it has some conditions to it.

g Leo then finds his power. He can summon the charictoristics  of any animal he sees for 12 hours.

Lee is the only one who doesnt find out his power. He gets bitter about it. Leo and Tom meet up alot to use there powers and have fn with them. They make a pact to never tell anyone about these powers and to only use them for fun because they dont want to get into trouble.

Lee finally gets his power when he gets punched in the eye by a bully. He has to go to the hospital and as they are checking his eye they suggest he should start wearing his glasses again. He used to get bullied for wearing them so never wore them again.

He does decide to wear them and suddenly his power becomes apparent. He can see peoples thoughts and can see 30 seconds into the future when he chooses to.

When he has found his power he goes round telling everyone ad showing off about it.

eventually this turns him to the worst and he becomes an evil super villian set on destroying anyone without glasses


Sample script on Adobe Story




Music- the music is continuos throughout the whole clip. It i quite quiet compared to the voice over and the dialog

00:05 there is dialog till 00:12 of the voice over. This is diegetic and non diegetic sound because the person he is speaking to can hear it but the people in the shot cannot.

00:12 there is diegetic sound of somone saying 'hey no powers'
00:13 sound effect of basketball bouncing
00:16 more voice over till 00:22
00:22 sound effects of discs flying till 00:24
00:24 lazer sound effects and discs smashing and also some voice over. sound effects finishing at 00:28. voiceover finishing at 00:30
00:32 start of voice over, finishing at 00:54 with sound effects of fire ball at 00:50-00:51
00:57 sound effect of the ice coming from the boys finger till 00:56
01:03 smashing of ice on the floor
01:13 diegetic sound of Bobby introducing him self and Rouge introducing her self 00:17
01:18 voice over till 01:28
01:28 Bobby diaglog till 01:30




Key-
Yellow- music
Red- voice over
Green- sound effects
Orange- dialog 
The dialog and voice over never overlap so the viewer can concentrate on what is going on at that point in the clip. It can get confusing if they are talking over each other. It also gives a chance to see what is actually happening rather than just  what the voice over is saying.

The music is instrumental and changes when important things are said. For example when the voice over says 'X-men' the music becomes louder and then Bobby says 'welcome to mutant high' This works as like an introduction and symbolises the end of the answer to wolfvereens's question.




X-men sound analysis

Music- the music is continuos throughout the whole clip. It i quite quiet compared to the voice over and the dialog

00:05 there is dialog till 00:12 of the voice over. This is diegetic and non diegetic sound because the person he is speaking to can hear it but the people in the shot cannot.

00:12 there is diegetic sound of somone saying 'hey no powers'
00:13 sound effect of basketball bouncing
00:16 more voice over till 00:22
00:22 sound effects of discs flying till 00:24
00:24 lazer sound effects and discs smashing and also some voice over. sound effects finishing at 00:28. voiceover finishing at 00:30
00:32 start of voice over, finishing at 00:54 with sound effects of fire ball at 00:50-00:51
00:57 sound effect of the ice coming from the boys finger till 00:56
01:03 smashing of ice on the floor
01:13 diegetic sound of Bobby introducing him self and Rouge introducing her self 00:17
01:18 voice over till 01:28
01:28 Bobby diaglog till 01:30