Old- Although t has a nice leadingline it looks too clutterd and people are too tightly spaces together. its hard to seesome people because others are in way of them.

IMPROVED- This photo has more depth because of the way the people are spaced.  and the person at the front has space to move into which gives an idea of them walking.

bad- over the shoulder shot gives a nice effect because it shows the work he is doing, however this could have been achieved better if it was cropped so the work could be seen more clearly. Also the computer to the right gives an unnecessary distraction

Improved- This shot is good because the subject is in focus and the whole frame is filled unlike the last one

Improved- This shot is imprived because you can see the book he is looking and see his face. Because he is an extra we didnt find it neccisary to include his whole whole head. I also think because the book is taking up a lot of the frame comapred to him it links with the voice over that says how focused he is on his work.

Old- the  background is quite clutterd and you cant really see his face. The photo is also quite dark and objects around him draw away from the subject

Old- The shot is blurry and the running. Apart from that the shot isnt too bad.

New- the shot isnt blurry this time and the whole frame is filled better.

Old- all the action in the shot is in the centre of the frame and the rest of the space isnt filled. The lines of the window could have been used to create a nicer effect.

Improved- this shot is ncie because the lines of the windows follow the direction the ball i going. Also it gives a nice depth to the shot and you cna clearly see the whole of the person recieving

Old- the shot is ok but could be improved if Lukes shoulder wasn't cut out. Alo it looks unnaturaly staged.

Improved- The shot is more in focus and the subjects take up all the frame. the pictures are also giving the shot a lot of depth and the subjects are evenly spaced apart which makes the shot symetical